Week 11 readings

All of these readings were very compelling. I really felt like I was part of the world being written about. All the authors were able to use anecdotes and information to paint the picture of what they were writing about. Jonathon Horley didn’t nee to explain to us how annoying all the ‘yes sir’ stuff it. I got really sick of it in Thailand when I was there for 10 days. Perhaps that has something to do with the fact I am a woman, but I digress…

Particularly in The Right Stuff, the real information was drip fed to us with a healthy dose of descriptive language so we could paint the picture for ourselves. Not only did this give me a very rich sense of the experience, it had me reading on, wantint to find out what happened.

Week 10 readings

Serving in Florida

This story really took me on a journey. The beautiful detailed descriptions make the story so real. I liked the way she used the details and facts to paint the picture of the alternate reality some Americans live in.

She notes to racial segregation, the drug testing and generally disregard for human rights as ingrained behaviours. Where do these attitudes begin? I think some of what is not said is also telling. The mysterious, middle manager is painted as a suitably dark character.

NYPD Inaction

This story was very organised and linear. It was a great way to contrast the treatment of the two different crimes. It also helped the reader to follow the story. As this is a reopened case, it could be fair to assume that many were familiar with it already. All the extra details and contrasting with the other cases really gave this article a new spin.

We still have not lived long enough

So many articles about the bushfires, but this one really stands out. The language is very strong and brings up some very vivid images and stirs some fear.

Interesting how the author describes “holocaust days” and talks of defending homes in the face of an “imaginable force” and urges people to build bunkers. Although these descriptions are very vivid, the language is soft as we need to be “wary” of fire plans which might lull us into complacency.

Week 11 class activity

Lured by cheap airfares, led by a veteran, including tree changers and retirees, the participants of this workshop are not a bunch of crocheting, tea-sipping, grey nomads. Instead, they are part of a human shield and being schooled in the art of peaceful protest.

With respect ingrained into the training, organisers expect the only ‘ferals’ to be living in the trees they plan to save.

Pirate attacks are increasing tenfold with Somali pirates demanding huge ransoms for ships and hostages. Navel vessels have done little to prevent the crime wave from being unleashed with survivors recounting the experience as ‘like war’.

With the number of hijackings rising and the human toll increasing, the situation is likely to become much worse. About 16 ships and nearly 300 hostages are still being held by Somali pirates.

Anatomy of a trauma

I really didn’t enjoy reading this.  I actually got a bit sqeamish and would never read something like this by chioce. I was, however, very impressed with it. It must have taken so long for the writers to put this story together. So many people have given information and most of them would have done so anonymously. I can imagine Richard turning up at the hospital and pretenting he doesn’t know people to protect their identity. There would have been alot of people concerned but unable to find a voice.

I was a bit surprised when Richard told us in class that he already has the rest of the year planned for stories. My first impression was “But how? News needs to be more current?” After a bit of reflection and studying the article, I can see how it must take a lot of time to get the story to a point where there are facts and witnesses and not just rumours and suspicion. it must take a very lomg time to develop trust. Richard was very likeable when he came to lecture for us and I can see how this may be his most improtant skill when researching the story.

The article is quite technical in its details and it must have taken a lot of studying and understanding of the medical industry to put it together. Also to understand the witnesses and to make sure that there really is a story and not just some disgruntled employees.

One thing I have beeen wondering about Richard…. Does he have any friends or is everyone  ’a source’?

Frankston Hoons

1 Police rescued a couple from their burning vehicle after they lost control attempting a burn out in Frankston last night.

2 The car skidded into an embankment and burst into flames after speeding out of a McDonald’s driveway in Richardson road at over 100 kilometres an hour.

3 The driver, Jim Allan, 23, is now in a stable condition at The Alfred hospital after suffering burns to his legs and torso. His girlfriend, Rachel Williams, 23, escaped without injury.

4 Williams, a retail assistant, said “it was a silly stunt that went too far”.

5 The two detectives who pulled the couple to safety have been commended by Police Commissioner Simon Overland for their “fast thinking, actions and their bravery.”

6 This is the fifth incident of its kind this year. The area is known as a hoon hotspot, with local residents also complaining about noise and exhaust fumes.

7 Police are concerned that despite controlled drag racing events being held, ‘stunt’ driving and drag racing is still popular in Frankston.

 

 

Soft News Story

1 Police have saved a couple from their burning vehicle after yet another reckless stunt went wrong in Frankston.

?? Police are today concerned about Frankston hoons who continue to put their lives at risk with stunt driving.

2 Two detectives were patrolling near the popular hoon hotspot on Richardson road when they witnessed the incident.

3 Jim Allan and his partner, Rachel Williams, both 23, were seen exiting the McDonalds at 100 kilometres per hour when they lost control.

 

 

Class activity – 4 hard, 4 soft

New research shows China and India are emerging as the boom markets for Australian Universities over the traditionally strong South East Asian markets.

Chinese and Indian on the menu for Australian Universities as statistics show enrollments shifting away from South East Asia.

Kew Grammar schoolgirl marked her graduation and earned the ire of school officials by completing her graduation speech naked last night.

Forget your 3 point hat and graduation robe, it was birthday suits causing a stir as a Kew Grammar teen bares all to mark the significance of her last day at school.

An unknown boy’s grave has been exhumed in Castlemaine so DNA technology can be used to solve the 41-year-old murder.

The Castlemaine “Boy in the Box” murder investigation is reopened as police exhume the body to take DNA samples in an attempt to wrap up the 41 year old case. The boy, aged 4 to 6, was found in a cardbox box with a blanket covering his bruised body. The medical coroner determined he had been beated to death.

Harley Dudley Surritte of Goold St Richmond assaulted police at his home with an Elvis Presley painting at 3.49pm last night after police responded to reports of a domestic argument.

Police were all shook up as they got a little less conversation and a lot more action when Harley Dudley Surritte of Goold St Richmond assaulted a police officer with a velvet painting of Elvis Presley after responding to reports of domestic violence.

There’s nothing better in life than diamonds, except your old mum and other gems from Mae West

I loved this article. It was so interesting to see the relationship that developed between the two women during the course of this interview.

We start with Mae West announcing her superiority, flashing her wealth, her admirers, her sucess with the exchange about diamonds. A master of the backhanded compliment, she evens appears to be empathetic to Charlotte and her diamond-less life. “Oh, you poor kid!”

Mae soon give Charlotte an opportunity to be approved of.  The smoking and drinking questons pass the test and Mae starts giving Charlotte some advice. Small gifts of cliches wrapped in compliments and just a whiff of something sexy. “Then you’ll keep your soft skin. That’s how I kept mine. I always use baby oil. But the secret is it has to be warm, and you have to have a man put it on you – all over.”

Mae keeps the established pecking order. It is very clear she is intelligent and sharp. Maybe being interviewed by a woman is heightening these things as she can be less reliant on her flirty, sexy alter ego.

Another implied insult, when she says “they always send a man” and how she never bothered with girls. Charlotte seems to not notice this putdown or other manipulative behaviour and this wins Mae over.

I like the reflection that Charlotte holds up a mirror to Mae West “that projects back the myth to the original mortal.” Mae does, seem to duck in and out of her carefully cutivated persona and we see glimpses of a real person.

The scarf coming off seems like an eccetric request, but we know someone like Mae sees it as a favour – fashion tips from the great, a sisterly sharing.  We still get the cliches, the sex, the men, the bedroom, but in between we get an insight to another Mae West.

More of the endless talk about the endless men gives way to insights about her mother. Mae admits there is something better in life than diamonds – her family. “I was never jealous of my brother and sister,” seems like an apology for receiving all their parents’ attentions.

Ever the professional, she slips back to the Mae West she is known for. Her love affair with the stage, the implied suggestion in the bedroom visit, her attitude towards money. But we get the best insight right at the end, when she admits she buys some of her own diamonds. This tells me how well Mae West knows herself – the persona and the real woman. This single admission allows Charlotte to see how most of the shimmering light surrounding Mae is a seriers of smoke and mirrors she has worked to her advantage.

I think Mae West sounded like a very strong woman. She was definately the ‘original’ and used cinema and movies as a way to constuct a carefull cultivated persona. Mae has become larger than life.  “She pointed out that although she was Diamond Lil, Lil was not Mae because there was no more Mae West.” I would have loved to see what she could have done with twitter.

Bank St Shooting Article

The main suspect in a gang murder was shot dead by police in Banks Street, South Melbourne at 7.15pm last night.

Police Special Operations Group members fatally shot the 29-year-old man after he got out of his car and threatened them with a sawn-off shot gun. He was pulled over as part of an ongoing operation to solve a gang related murder.

According to Sandra Neitz from the Police Media Unit, more than one round was fired when five of the 20-strong Police unit opened fire, resulting in wounds to the chest and a fatal head-shot.

The victim, a nightclub security operator, was driving in Banks Street with two others when he was intercepted by armed Special Operations Group members after police received a tip off regarding the victim’s location as part of the ongoing operation.

The passengers of the car, a man, 40 and the deceased’s defacto, a 25-year-old woman, are assisting police with their enquiries at the St Kilda Road Police Complex. They were both armed at the time of their arrest, but no shots were fired at Police.

Witnesses saw a woman on the ground being handcuffed. A local resident, Joel Price, said ‘it sounded like fire crackers and police were running around everywhere.’

The Police Officers involved will undergo counselling and the shooting is under investigation.

My Short News Article

I would like to cover an event at my workplace. I work at the Victorian Police Academy so there are lots of functions.  On Friday 1st April, a new squad of recruits will be sworn in. They are not graduating, they are a few weeks in and taking their oath. This is significant as it is the first lot of recruits to be sworn in under the new learning system being implemented by the Academy. In the past, recruits would do 21 weeks of training and be sworn in at graduation. The changes mean that recruits now take a 33 week course which includes more field work experience. They are now taking their oath early so they can participate in the work places as part of their training. They will re-affirm their oath on graduation and again after 2 years when they become confirmed constables and officially graduate with their Diploma of Policing. I can get a quote from the Superintendant or Assistant Comissioner but the serious brass have already indicated they will not have time for a proper interview. I will interview one of the Education Specialist and a couple of the recruits.

SuperMedia

I love that the public can become involved in journalism. Its sad for the lucky few who earn heaps of money by keeping it as a monopoly, but thats progress (of sorts). Diana has told us that the media is the 4th estate keeping those inpower honest. Now that the media has become so powerful and far reaching, its good that someone is keep the media accountable!

Peter Ellingsen’s article was very thought provoking. I have only just read it so I might have to come back after some reflection. I think he is pointing out that even the facts have a point of view. I think I need to read it again.

How depressing is the article about Atlanta. It was written pre-GFC, so the situation is probably worse now. All those forclosures would have grown dramatically. Totally compounded by the huge rush in house prices just before the GFC. Its really sad that those in power are protecting their own interests and not allowing the living wage to be enforced. Henry Ford once increased his factory workers wage by a huge percentage. It was criticised as a bad business decision. When questioned why, he explained that he wanted his workers to be able to buy his product. Selfish or selfless? He really understood capitalism and how a city is an integrated web of people. The divide between the rich and poor is staggering. I often ask myself what can I do?? I can’t directly help those in Atlanta, but I can help myself. I am furthering my education, working hard, hoping that I can always look after myself. I want to always be in a position where I am comfortable enough to have enough energy left over for empathy to those less advanged. I won’t be a burden on anyone and if I lose everything, I will always have my eduaction. If I have children, I will teach them that the world is not a meritocracy, and to take every opportunity as a gift and a priviledge.  What are you doing?

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